قبلا باهاتون در رابطه با فرمت نامه در تسک یک رایتینگ جنرال صحبت کردم. گفتیم که بهتره از فرمت زیر برای نوشتن نامه های formal استفاده کنین:
Dear Sir/Madam
Paragraph 1- Say why you are writing to them. (I am writing with regard to…)
Paragraph 2- Bullet point 1 and supporting details
Paragraph 3- Bullet point 2 and supporting details
Paragraph 4- Bullet point 3 and supporting details
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
[Your Full Name]
همین! فقط چند دقیقه طول می کشه تا این فرمت رو در امتحان بنویسین و بعدش تنها کاری که باید انجام بدین اینه که به جزئیات فکر کنین.
When thinking of supporting details don’t worry about being entertaining or even thinking of the best ideas you can, just make sure they are relevant.
در ادامه متن مجموعه ای جمله های کاربردی در نامه های رسمی وجود داره. عباراتی که انتخاب می کنین به نوع سوال بستگی داره.
| Beginning |
- I am writing this letter with regard to…
- I am writing to bring to your attention…
- I am writing to inform you that…
- I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with…..
| Requests and Suggestions |
- I would be grateful if you would…
- I would like you to…
- I am entitled to request that you….
- I was wondering if it would be at all possible to….
- I would like to suggest that….
| Ending |
- I look forward to hearing from you.
- I look forward to receiving your response.
- I await your prompt service.
- I thank you for your consideration.
- Please respond at the earliest convenience.
| IELTS Letter Writing Checklist |
- در اینجا چند سوال وجود داره که باید هنگام پاسخ دادن به هر سوال General Training task 1 از خودتون بپرسین.
- آیا دستورالعمل های سوالو خوندم و فهمیده ام؟
- نامه رسمی است یا غیر رسمی؟
- Have I included both the reason for writing and the 3 bullet points?
- Have I supported each bullet point with relevant details?
- آیا ایده های من واضح و قابل درک است؟
- آیا نامه ای که نوشتم و به پاراگراف های جدا تقسیم کردم؟
- آیا از کپی کردن سوال خودداری کردم و سوال و پارافریز کردم؟
- آیا نامه رو از نظر اشتباهات گرامری و املای چک کردم؟
If you can answer all of these questions you are well on your way to writing a good formal letter.
در ادامه ی این متن واستون یک سمپل بند 9 تسک یک و گذاشتیم تا بتونین ازش ایده بگیرین و بررسیش کنین. هم چنین نظر اگزمینر و هم بعد از این متن میتونین بخونین.
On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
- describe the item you lost
- explain how you lost it
- tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing to inform you that I recently lost my digital camera while on holiday in Vietnam.
The camera is a black Canon 70d and cost $1550 when I bought it new last month. It has a resolution of 20 megapixels, a Canon 67 millimeter lens and was in a brown leather case with my name on it.
I lost it when I was having coffee with my husband in the backpacker area of Ho Chi Minh City. I believe the coffee shop was called Highlands Coffee and it was on Pham Ngu Lao Street. We had been at the coffee shop for around 45 minutes when I noticed it was missing.
I am entitled to make a claim for the value of the above mentioned item and request that you send me details on what I need to do in order to proceed.
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully
John Smith
(162 words)
| در ادامه نظر اگزمینر آیلتس و درباره این نامه بخونین: |
This candidate has fully answered the question by covering both the purpose of the letter and the three bullet points in the question. The candidate has also used the appropriate formal tone. All ideas are supported with relevant details.
The ideas are clear and well organised. Paragraphing has been used well.
Vocabulary is both accurate and appropriate. Words such as digital, resolution, backpacker and claim show a high level of vocabulary.
The candidate has used a range of tenses (present simple, present perfect, present continuous, past continuous and past simple) and all sentences are error-free.
Band 9.
| اگر دوست داری نوشتن نامه برای تسک یک Writing رو یادبگیری اینجا کلیک کن |